Notes:  Critiques are not edited, they are posted exactly as they are sent.  The identity of the poster is anonymous, but every time that specific person sends in a critique they will post under the same number. A consistent assigned number is a great way to establish a continuity of thought from post to post. Feel free to rebut, reply or comment.AAC #1     I stumbled across the Veterans Book project display at UWP.  The books are cool, they really make you think about how terrible war is on a…See More